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Can't you see me
By brokenheartedmarine
Here I am standing in front of you...
But you don't seem to notice me
Here I am begging you to love me
Because I'm so very madly in love with you!!
Here I am in front of you dieing to hold you...
But do you ever miss me?
Here I am wanting you,
But you never really wanted me did you?
And still, here I am standing in front you...
Yet you still don't seem to notice me.
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Comments on "Can't you see me"
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Err0r
(358)
wrote:
I agree with Monkey, this is slightly teenish. You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make them drink. If they don't like you, they don't. Go find smoeone worth your time.
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Stupid horses
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Agreed.
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Also a teenish write. God I'm old and these kind of feeling seems so far away.
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Midian
(19) wrote:
If I had a dime for everytime I felt like that. Nice poem.
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
if you aim for a rhyme scheme, maybe it would help to alternate your me's, and you's, it might add some tangibility. but i can fully empathize with not getting what you want.
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