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"Thank you, the subject of this work has since moved on, but my life has straightened out as well. Your time, to read my work, is greatly appreciated. Lawrence E."
Posted by Preacher X on "Environmental Paradoxes of a Simplistic Complex Nature" by Preacher X

"Beautiful nice word choices and happy she likes you, I think so! Ask her out keep writing, this was good. "
Posted by Unknown on "Environmental Paradoxes of a Simplistic Complex Nature" by Preacher X

"Thank you very much. It's been a while since I was truely active here. My muse has wained once again. I am glad one of my works once again touched someone."
Posted by Preacher X on "Soliloquy unto nature." by Preacher X

"Amazing..imagery is inspirational..Unique and creative..Things so small viewed among our big world..Thanks for sharing."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Soliloquy unto nature." by Preacher X

"so beautiful wonderful art youve created:)"
Posted by italianbella on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"o.O ?"
Posted by Preacher X on "Dangerous Minds" by Preacher X

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Posted by Mari on "Dangerous Minds" by Preacher X

"i would like to find a better word for beautiful, less common, because these peice is unique... and yet all i can think of is beautful. *messenger"
Posted by thelostmessenger on "Soliloquy unto nature." by Preacher X

"Very well done, I liked the different ways to read it. Lovely flow, beautiful~ *applauds*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Twilight Musings of Uncarved Melodies upon silent winds" by Preacher X

"Feel free. I actually have another peice with this style but it requires more formatting that postcard allows to show properly."
Posted by Preacher X on "Twilight Musings of Uncarved Melodies upon silent winds" by Preacher X

"Wow, interesting concept! I'm intrigued! Well written, and the style you've created (?) will cause me to dig into it again later, and toy with myself, if that's ok?"
Posted by Sketso on "Twilight Musings of Uncarved Melodies upon silent winds" by Preacher X

"For those who missed it, please read this peice once through in it's entirity. Once down start at the first line and read down again, the first line of each stanza. Once done, continue from the top once again reading the second line of each."
Posted by Preacher X on "Twilight Musings of Uncarved Melodies upon silent winds" by Preacher X

"*coughs* ahem....corrected first work in third stanza"
Posted by Preacher X on "Twilight Musings of Uncarved Melodies upon silent winds" by Preacher X

"well put :) - I too have my credentials and for me it is all about truth and understanding and the individual take on such things"
Posted by mysticventures on "2007-09-09 Journal Entry - Why I became a Minister with the ULC." by Preacher X

"god, this touched me so deeply. amazing that you could put all of that together so clearly. im never able to explain those things. truly understanding and peaceful"
Posted by Moonflower on "2007-09-09 Journal Entry - Why I became a Minister with the ULC." by Preacher X

"i wanna know who it was.... *shudders from wonderfulness*"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"this was magnificant"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"bittersweet is quite the word of choice.. this was so delicate, I thought it might shatter line by line.. "
Posted by Unknown on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"Sweet indeed. Do the summer, winter, spring thing to"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"Thany you for the smile on my face and in my heart."
Posted by Narcissa on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"This peice is to be reworked in the near future when i can find time to do so."
Posted by Preacher X on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"woah........damn,,,,,,,,,,like, woah,,,,,♥ you were really right,. awesome write,,,,,,,woah"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"You want them to shudder when she does, be wet when she is. You want them to close their eyes and feel it. Right now you are just telling them instead of showing them. Deb"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"May I make a suggestion that might help? You need to work on the point of view. Choose his or hers and give her a name, you have too many pronouns. Also, working on POV will help the reader feel what you want them to feel. You want them to shudder whe"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"*smiles softly* Hmmm...hehe, I love this piece. YOU are amazing, m'dear grasshopper. This was spoken, like the softest of whispers across time's ticking hands, reaching out to ensnare the heart and lock it safely away. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"thank you :)"
Posted by Preacher X on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"awww so sweet."
Posted by Mylissa on "Bittersweet Musings of the Garden Variety" by Preacher X

"erotic short story...how did I know Sin would be here?"
Posted by Winter Born on "Untitled Erotic Story Rough Draft (Expect problems)" by Preacher X

"Very sweet, and beautiful."
Posted by Mylissa on "Soliloquy unto nature." by Preacher X

"this was so eloquent and amazing. "
Posted by torn_beauty on "Soliloquy unto nature." by Preacher X

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