Dangerous Minds

By Preacher X

Dangerous minds are dark and dim,
The danger you see comes from within.
A dangerous mind is not a phase,
It clouds your mind with a haze.
This haze is explosive,
It will ignite with but one spark.
This is what makes a dangerous mind dark.
To posses a dangerous mind I find,
Is no walk in the park.
What do you think makes,
A dangerous mind dark?
To posses a dangerous mind is no game,
it will tear you apart all the same.
These are the symptoms of a dangerous mind,
Tell me some more if more you ever find.


Lawrence E Mitchell
March 18, 1996

1:3/1
Death Bed

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© 1996-2007 Lawrence E. Mitchell
Published on Saturday, June 2, 2007.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Sunday, December 16, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    ./

  • Preacher X On Monday, December 17, 2007, Preacher X (34)By person wrote:

    o.O ?

  • Moonflower On Thursday, June 7, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    nice. i like your style ;).

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, June 7, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Wellcome to DP.. Groowy having you here

  • thelostmessenger On Wednesday, June 6, 2007, thelostmessenger (110)By person wrote:

    very nice. from ur few works u seem to be a great writer. i cant wait either. *messenger

  • Midian On Saturday, June 2, 2007, Midian (19)By person wrote:

    Nice. I like where you are going with this. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

  • Preacher X On Saturday, June 2, 2007, Preacher X (34)By person wrote:

    Note the series notation at the bottom. This is a series notation format that I use for alot of my work. :/ This peice is the first of 3 poems in my first series of work entitled Death Bed.

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