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"Very original. Like it. ^_^"
Posted by Unknown on "(((foretold staggers & thrown-up hands)))" by asphyxia

"hehe beautiful!"
Posted by insideout on "(((foretold staggers & thrown-up hands)))" by asphyxia

"heartbreaking, sad, yet beautiful and powerful. nicely done. ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "(((foretold staggers & thrown-up hands)))" by asphyxia

"thank you!!! :D"
Posted by asphyxia on "finally something new!" by asphyxia

"thank you carl! =)"
Posted by asphyxia on "finally something new!" by asphyxia

"Fantastic piece :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "finally something new!" by asphyxia

"m'dear, this was well worth the wait!love it :)"
Posted by Unknown on "finally something new!" by asphyxia

"There is a conflict between teh unraveling and the confinement. I like how you begin with very concrete images and specific details. well done "
Posted by steuss on "Countdown seconds are the longest kind" by asphyxia

"*pulls The Scream from Edvard Munch's painting* Indecision is a real bastard. Kill the fear! This was very well put, Jolene. Rockin' :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Contemplations" by asphyxia

"you hit it exactly. =)"
Posted by asphyxia on "Contemplations" by asphyxia

"haunting.. love the quote at the start..'she was a pale moon un/risen' oh cutieful, oh cutieful :)"
Posted by Tania on "Contemplations" by asphyxia

"look long not into the abyss ....for it may look back into you"
Posted by Unknown on "Contemplations" by asphyxia

"thank you narcissa!! "
Posted by asphyxia on "ever-still, ever-dark" by asphyxia

"Truly at limbo..a heart-breaker that's very well wrought. Nice one, Jolene! -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "ever-still, ever-dark" by asphyxia

"this made me feel abandoned..like being lost at sea.. drowning. painful but yes.. like narcissa said, beautiful."
Posted by Tania on "ever-still, ever-dark" by asphyxia

"Painfully beautifull"
Posted by Narcissa on "ever-still, ever-dark" by asphyxia

"this made me think of pine beetles and diseased limbs...ya, death is a real biotch sometimes :P"
Posted by Unknown on "the killer in the back" by asphyxia

"I had never read yours neither but i loved this."
Posted by BeautifullyRuined on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"this is read with such an easy flow and rythm, very impressive! i may be a bit late, but still, welcome to dp."
Posted by Tonights Decision on "[i see the lies but still trip over them]" by asphyxia

"I liked the repeates. It makes you feel the obsession over the decision and the uncertainty so I was right at home!"
Posted by Unknown on "One Should Not Listen To Bright Eyes [when in this bad of state]" by asphyxia

"thank you, raskal! glad you liked it."
Posted by asphyxia on "You." by asphyxia

"this is beautiful - a bit like a psalm, and very uplifting."
Posted by Unknown on "You." by asphyxia

"not going to lie, i feel quite confident after receiving a third "perfect" on this. thank you very much! "
Posted by asphyxia on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"i'm glad you liked it! =)"
Posted by asphyxia on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"thank you very much! i wasn't sure what the response would be for this one, so i'm really glad you and many others enjoyed it."
Posted by asphyxia on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"I can't believe how much you've captured in this. Well writ. "
Posted by nur hidayah on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"Wow. This is really good. I like it a lot. So much to take in for so few words. "
Posted by Unknown on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"ahhh.. loved this ..'my blanket chokes with hands of lonliness.' ... 'death is a twin sized bed' beautiful display cutieful.lovvvve it :)"
Posted by Tania on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"this is my favorite from you for sure..loved it!"
Posted by Unknown on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

"i fully agree with the saint... perfect"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "[surely my bed is out to get me]" by asphyxia

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