finally something new!

By asphyxia



To every girl who wants
with Bottled Hope held to the skies,
You’re foolish, so foolish;
an imploration… for Infeasibility.
Your T’s are star-crossed--
the dots are hearts.
There’s constellations
in your Chin-up Eyes.
[The story got lost,
Optimism failed;
the paper’s white,
and He has bailed.]
I guess she forgot
(there's no lovers in the sky!)
But mere reminders
of Dying Faith first Pausing,
now Passing By.


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© 2007 asphyxia; Jolene Korrin Long
Published on Friday, November 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, December 15, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Fantastic piece :)

  • asphyxia On Saturday, December 29, 2007, asphyxia (56)By person wrote:

    thank you carl! =)

  • A former member wrote: m'dear, this was well worth the wait!love it :)

  • asphyxia On Saturday, December 29, 2007, asphyxia (56)By person wrote:

    thank you!!! :D

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