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Contemplations
By asphyxia
“She was a pale moon un/risen
for the whole world to see.
Among mountains of un/surety
she thought of His name.”
Perhaps then a ghost appeared
intent on fouling up her day.
But then again, it may have been,
the idealized Historic-You|revised.
Or possibly it may just be
the ring of “youplusme” is all I hear;
…any and all of this I’ve feared.
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© 2007 asphyxia; Jolene Korrin Long
Published on Friday, August 31, 2007.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 12, 2007, carlosjackal
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wrote:
*pulls The Scream from Edvard Munch's painting* Indecision is a real bastard. Kill the fear! This was very well put, Jolene. Rockin' :)
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On Friday, August 31, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
haunting.. love the quote at the start..'she was a pale moon un/risen' oh cutieful, oh cutieful :)
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A former member wrote:
look long not into the abyss ....for it may look back into you
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
you hit it exactly. =)
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