Comments by All Members

"sweet poem both in quality and content. Great write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Tuscan Fields in Clouds Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"so much more delicate and fierce than your older stuff, it shows your evolution. more simple, and less fluff, meat and potatoes of your soul. dig in"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Coiling around a Spectrum of Spirals Depict my Future" by Revisable Retina

"where are the comments????? this is a passionate plea...a beautiful entry into the hopeful and the hopelessness of minds and souls; how we twist with the ache un.named and un.held.. .. .. its a slowdeath.....its a watchful wailing......completely out in the open. and where are the comments????? jeeze. stoopid poetry place."
Posted by Unknown on "Burning Slower then Embers into Delicate Ash" by Revisable Retina

"had a very daydream-spaceout feel to it that I enjoyed. Lost in the moment. Interesting, thanks for sharing."
Posted by Dilated View on "Metal Wings Hurt/Under Lucid Sheets " by Revisable Retina

"Thank you so much :D I find the sour times in your life make for great poetry."
Posted by Revisable Retina on "Coiling around a Spectrum of Spirals Depict my Future" by Revisable Retina

"I think this hasnt received any comments because...I have no idea why this doesn't have any comments. This was fuckin-a right good."
Posted by Aleas on "Coiling around a Spectrum of Spirals Depict my Future" by Revisable Retina

"You have effectively found the hole inside of me and gouged it ever deeper, beautifully written, def. a fav!"
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "Observing Searing Petals-Through Curious Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"a mind cramp from working a thought into lactic despair...left empty and plural."
Posted by Unknown on "Metal Wings Hurt/Under Lucid Sheets " by Revisable Retina

"Nice. Good use of adjectives and verbs. "
Posted by Unknown on "Metal Wings Hurt/Under Lucid Sheets " by Revisable Retina

"...and now matter how we deaden, to escape the frustration, still we dream... dream of utopia, so that all we experience in waking is somewhat akin to hell. Flames aren't need to scorch our innards, for the emptiness, the silence, does a far better job. Commando slam on the way I feel today."
Posted by Sketso on "Observing Searing Petals-Through Curious Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"Totally know where these thoughts derive from,..the saddest part is they can be the most real part of us. I wrote a piece called 'rsvp' awhile ago,..and this is what i were trying to accomplish,..you jus done it more effectively..thankyou."
Posted by Unknown on "Observing Searing Petals-Through Curious Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"The last five lines was like a sucker punch... very cool."
Posted by freudian-slip on "Observing Searing Petals-Through Curious Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"This was very sweet. The imagery was absolutely beautiful, I could really picture everything. So descriptive, so vivid. The end really pulls it back to reality in a nice clean way."
Posted by wilted on "Observing Searing Petals-Through Curious Eyes" by Revisable Retina

"music is all that will ever complete me. and the title is fantastic. i wouldn't be here if it weren't for music. thats a life i care not to imagine."
Posted by thelostmessenger on "-Tongues Twisted in Melody-" by Revisable Retina

"'in a pile of pyres paper bound in leather'- this is actually quite brilliant. love the way it ends with the precision pouring and i d e -maybe an anagram of 'die'. excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"*for what's it's worth it doesn't hurt. Run FOR cover. x. You're beautiful. "
Posted by slow.burn.star on "Precipitating in Spirals with Access to a Revolver" by Revisable Retina

"/With the cunning posture of a demon / as well as the last stanza. brilliant"
Posted by Unknown on "From a Poet to the Philosopher" by Revisable Retina

"i liked this very much,initialy i was drawn by the tittle but the poem was more than a good title, fiiting ending also,and now she can sleep says, but with who will be the sleep shared..."
Posted by Unknown on "Precipitating in Spirals with Access to a Revolver" by Revisable Retina

"Hey, I liked this. It seemed like a very laid back version of revenge, almost methodical non-chalance. It makes me glad not to love anymore. Well done."
Posted by Hydra on "Precipitating in Spirals with Access to a Revolver" by Revisable Retina

"Wow absolutely amazing!!! Great job =)"
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"b. e. a . utiful. as are YOU. I hear your words. ___deep. under the flesh. and. . . hi. Love the hair."
Posted by slow.burn.star on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"very beautiful imagery in this piece!"
Posted by GoldenLotus on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"Some really classic metaphors. Finishing out the last line was like waking up from a nightmare. Vivid... but surreal, like only dreams can do. Write on. I enjoyed the hell out of this."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"Wow... This just blew me away... Awesome write! -Geisha"
Posted by Niemand on "Deluding Whiskey with Cyan.i.d.e" by Revisable Retina

"Great scott, what a return!!! 'My mind holds nothing but incompetent thoughts'... followed by 'Infatuated with destructive day dreams', and a faint glimmer of hope in the final two words, words I wish I could embrace, yet . . . I'm afraid to. This tower has fallen. You have painted a picture of the soul that an image could never portray, my friend. I'm awestruck."
Posted by Sketso on "Paralyzed Words - Fruitless Battles" by Revisable Retina

"how is it that i haven't managed to see any of your writing until now? this was fantastic...the ended lingering in a haunting whisper. i must read more of you..."
Posted by verablue on "Paralyzed Words - Fruitless Battles" by Revisable Retina

"Existentially I feel like this piece speaks more words about the self (quite ironic), than any 16 year old emo cutter could ever divulge. Your honesty speaks volumes and sets a tone for deeply reflective material that is uncommon to what I am used to seeing on this site, and what I am used to reading in general. People should take notes on how to write, and you should be the one giving the lecture. The vacuity in the beginning makes it all seem hopeless, but in the end there is a realization of hope (minus the melodramatic cliché), and makes me want to try harder in my own life."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Paralyzed Words - Fruitless Battles" by Revisable Retina

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