Comments by All Members
- "first misspelling but then i spell things wrong too its tarrot (i think) there isnt really a from to this more thoughts but its not to bad keep writing"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Save me" by The_Scavenger
- "hmm are u have second thoughts deary? the poem its self itsnt bad simple short gets the point to the reader. *side note bout time u got new stuff up!"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Spinning" by The_Scavenger
- "WOW! I like this but it is also something I fear... I fear that u will never come back and I also fear Josh will never come back!...:("
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Time of War" by The_Scavenger
- "Very good. Very haunted.´I truely liked it... Something i live by is this...
Dont ever do anything that go against your beliefs. No matter what they are. Ever! It is a road away from yourself."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Time of War" by The_Scavenger
- "I liked this alot. It was good to hear your doubts. Never hide them in fear, they can only grow bigger then. Pull them out in the open and conclude, like you have. This contains alot in a few words. Very good."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "will I" by The_Scavenger
- "This was interesting. It had nice flow, and good choice of words. Still for me it is to close to real "story telling". I loved it becouse i care about "you two". But as a poem i think it needs editing."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Date" by The_Scavenger
- "This poem got depth. And i belived it to be true. That is what you want for a poem, and especially a love poem. Keep writing what you feel. I enjoyed this one."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Love & Pain" by The_Scavenger
- "U will be missed and people will be proud as Aurora said! I don't know how u could think that atleast she wouldn't miss u! "
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "will I" by The_Scavenger
- "how could u think foe even a second that i wouldn't miss u or be proud of u. i love u and i'll miss u and be so proud of u and i'll remember every moment that we were happy together while u are gone. i love u much so. and i like this write too ur parents "
Posted by Aurora_Light on "will I" by The_Scavenger
- "I like it...its good sept...you rymed date with date...oh well.....great job'!"
Posted by Unknown on "Date" by The_Scavenger
- ""And as I pass through the Golden Gates of Heaven, I vow to you,
I will always love and protect you from above with all my love" Wow I like that part... For someone to have that much love is unbelevable... But then again I've never been in love...lol"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "My last Resort" by The_Scavenger
- " nice. I know what it feels like to go places w/ people you don't know, but sometimes it is a good thing (like in your case). I'm really glade you BOTH went because now I have a new friend who helped me probably more then anyone. No Offence Tut Tut. :)"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Date" by The_Scavenger
