Spinning

By The_Scavenger

Spinning sky
Spinning Ground
Spinning, spinning all around
Down I fall
I hit the ground
Sky still spinning
Chest is bleeding
All is dark
Then I hear that deadly sound
Of that snipers round.

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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Monday, December 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: quick, short, effective. nice

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    oh dear, having second thoughts I see...maybe... Well this is a nice write, and yes it is good u posted more!

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hmm are u have second thoughts deary? the poem its self itsnt bad simple short gets the point to the reader. *side note bout time u got new stuff up!

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