Comments by All Members
- ""I need to get out of this hole
instead of dwelling further.
I need to find the light inside
to save me from myself." This stanza really hit a nerve for me. Have felt this way so many times, and sometimes it feels like even the act of attempting to claw out of that hole just ends up making the hole deeper. I liked that you did two completely separate poems here but that they meshed together well. Thank you for sharing your pain."
Posted by Dilated View on "Trapped in Depression" by Dark Nymph
- "i am always sorry to read poetry like this.... true feelings are poured out when emotions are high. i hope you are above all this pain now"
Posted by natalie on "Letting go of the past" by Dark Nymph
- "awww this was so sad and heart breaking..it's funny love is supposed to be one of the most happiest things yet it breaks us in the end! it's not fair yet what is?"
Posted by Unknown on "White Rose" by Dark Nymph
- "Letting the mind wonder can often be insighful. I just joined a meditation group...just so I could have time to hear myself think.Quieting thought and being present is good too.*is baffled by the statement in quotes and loves being hypocritical at times."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "2007-05-07 Journal Entry" by Dark Nymph
- "This deserves more comments. I love the directness of this piece, like honest advice in poetry form, the meter is quite gorgeous and the 1st stanza grabs you and never lets go as you are drawn into the rest of the poem. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Lullaby" by Dark Nymph
- "move on babe! this was great and nicely written..ur a great writter and ur feelings are felt..gret job!
~manda~"
Posted by Unknown on "Moving On" by Dark Nymph
- "WOW...such a romantic mind coupled with intelligence. I loved this....But damn I am a romantic and therefore love all romance....Thank you for this."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Honorable Knight" by Dark Nymph
- "Do you know Sturm Brightblade from the Dragonlance Chronicles? This reminded me of him. I wish there are men like him at this day and age. A good and true write. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Honorable Knight" by Dark Nymph
- "babe! this was fuckin awsome i loved it and u like a sister..ur not alone i'll go to that place with you so we can take over..ofcourse i get to be the queen;)
luv manda"
Posted by Unknown on "Demons inside me" by Dark Nymph
- "Oh 'tashia... Every words pounded my heart. This was totally awesome, I loved every single word you have wrote. The feeling went out straight. I know how you feel. I hope to catch you on sometimes so we can talk. - Nore"
Posted by Unknown on "Demons inside me" by Dark Nymph
- "This is great.. being played like a puppet is a sad affair..'my heart is your new toy' great write honey you capture the scenario well."
Posted by Tania on "Puppet" by Dark Nymph
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