Comments by All Members
- "another great piece of work! my fav would have to be the last stanza leading to the ending. perfect, perfect ending. and i loved the way it ahlted a bit with teh use of 'anything' in bracket. very well done."
Posted by evcfenix on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "The third stanza owns my soul. You pretty thing. You stamp your words out on my heart and make it painful to breathe anything except your beauty. I love you. "
Posted by Unknown on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "whoa this was excellent...great refrshing use of vocab, detailed and brilliant and a mixture of oblique and clear, metaphors twisting into one another like new fangled lovers....great post here missy "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "Realy great. I loved so many lines in this, and the write as a whole fits so perfectly together. "an endless growth of paper" was a big plus to this write. . "
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "now i can see what all the hype is about the Nuri.... i have tragically been missing out on thoughtfull, beautifull, intellegent, writes."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "I've read this a few times but only now feel ready to give comment...wonderful flow, a rich cascade of beautiful singing language that put a smile on my face. Uniquely magnificent =) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Green of Home" by nur hidayah
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