Comments by All Members
- "I like the rhythm to this it lulls one into a calming effect. I definitely like your style, thank you for sharing. "
Posted by Korruption on "rollercoaster" by lajeeves
- "very sad and has inspired me 2 write something i hope of similar value. thanks for sharing"
Posted by natalie on "alshimers" by lajeeves
- "I really appreciate this work. Thank you for reminding me of what hope looks like. Sometimes I can't see it."
Posted by Phalanx on "redemption" by lajeeves
- "damn good piece, i'm sorry you had to go through that.sucks her name was steph though....
-stephanie a.k.a empty_remains"
Posted by Unknown on "steph (step-on-me)" by lajeeves
- "I'm going to echo the same comment about fairytale endings. They're beautiful in much the same way your poem is. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "redemption" by lajeeves
- "This would make a good story book tale.
Let me know if you need illustrations...
I loved it. Wish it would go on..."
Posted by bpathos on "redemption" by lajeeves
- "I've heard that story before... and (in my case) also had a happy ending. Very enjoyable =)"
Posted by Unknown on "redemption" by lajeeves
- "(this is one of those comments matt made the "X" for) 2nd stanza, 3rd line, last word"
Posted by Unknown on "fuck it" by lajeeves
- "if it was so simple then we'd live in our own world. but no, there are obstacles and complications. and why were we meant to love if we were bound to fail? these supposed reasons are beyond my control. but without the look in your eyes the future is doome"
Posted by Unknown on "you.. fill in the blanks!!" by lajeeves
- "if...a picture paints a thousand words,then you must be blind.but no,you claim you can read me like a book,and why should I doubt you? these fairytale desires are beyond my control,but without you in my heart the future is only a piece of loveless fiction"
Posted by Unknown on "you.. fill in the blanks!!" by lajeeves
- ""if I were a fish and had only one wish
Id be a light switch and marry a ceiling fan"..you can always make me smile! ~Meg"
Posted by Unknown on "fuck it" by lajeeves
- "i'd do it again! great job and i would have done the same..i often find myself fighting those who think they are better than others.."
Posted by Unknown on "THAT NIGHT" by lajeeves
- "wow this was powerful.i really like your style and hope to read more from you!"
Posted by Unknown on "alshimers" by lajeeves
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