THAT NIGHT

By lajeeves

Bleach blond
Shell shocked
Bruised broke and bitter
Push my buttons
Spit in my face
I didn't want to hit her
Look down on me
Like I am less
That’s one fuckin test
Were I’m not at my best
But that's how it goes
Looks down her nose
Like I’m a disgrace
Not for her taste
So a slap in the face
Put her in her place
For what went down
I often feel shame
But if it happened all over again...................

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© 2007 lajeeves
Published on Tuesday, March 6, 2007.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • bpathos On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, bpathos (78)By person wrote:

    A snapshot of somewhere. A slice of candid life.

  • A former member wrote: i'd do it again! great job and i would have done the same..i often find myself fighting those who think they are better than others..

  • A former member wrote: Great beginning and excellent ending. Bravo

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