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- "She was my best friend. She was my other mother. She was my grandma. She was my confident. She was the one person I could rely on. Some people are supportive. Other people avoid me. Some people (my friends) are hurt that I'm not leaning on them. I don't want to lean on anybody...I don't deserve it.
Grandma, how can it be true? How can you really be gone? Why didn't I say goodbye or I love you that morning? Do you hate me now? Do you resent me? Do you still love me?
I love you.
"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- ":::sniffle::: I guess you were wrong, I guess I was too. Our mind is such a delicate thing...one little blood clot...too much time lost...and POOF!! Stories, lives, people...vanish from memory like they were never there. This makes me so sad to read grandma...so sad. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "I agree.. The burning bush is about to burn out... Thanks to the people who have had enough of so much ignorance.. way too late but better late than never.. "
Posted by sixsixnine on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "I would not be surprised if we are like the universe without beginning or end just the illussion of it here in the flesh.. This is warm and Beautifully RAW... I love it ~669~"
Posted by sixsixnine on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "So true so true. This was expressed beautifully. You have a real talent here. Very nice. =) I look forward to reading more. "
Posted by Err0r on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "I think thats a good way to see things, gone, but not forgotten. =) What a wonderfully lovely write. "
Posted by Err0r on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "You know, I'm not a fan of rhyming...but that's because people usually can't pull it off too well. But you my dear pull it off with ease. This was sad...very sad. Welcome to dp."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "Wow this is great. Very sad story it tells. I love how you made it rhyme. Great structure. Glad to have you and I look forward to reading more of your work. -Kinks"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "The truth of this makes me want to cry.
Having my own family in the middle east, and knowing I may one day soon be there as well, leaving mine behind....
-Heather-"
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "Agreed, We are soo young yet, and can already see the many different paths we have taken. Wonderful Write, just dont forget that the younger ones do still like to listen, so share on and those memories will live for longer than you can imagine. -Heather"
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "This is beautiful. What a solemn yet wise documentation of change and evolution. Lovely. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "Wow, You should passion in pain. Although I do agree with the war and do agree with it. I do understand your point of view on this. I guess only time will tell if this war is a complete waste of time or not. "
Posted by Unknown on "Bombs on Bush" by AppleDumpling
- "Welcome to DP. I have you are here to stay and I look forward to reading more poetry from you. ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
- "All that was beautiful. I loved the last stanza. I think everybody can relate to this piece of poetry in many ways. We have all had friends come and go either in a passing or just drifting away."
Posted by Unknown on "My Changes" by AppleDumpling
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