Comments by All Members
- ""Your obsession with finding my flaws,
Makes me think- you may still care." so true. i enjoyed the entire poem although the lines stated above were my favorite"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "I liked the 3rd and last stanza's the best. the poem flows so smooth and fast when you are reading it, you have to re-read it to get the depth of it. good write "
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Tainted Existance" by darth ren
- "love this, man has chosen to need a reason for their existance, it's sorta funny, how they react when you say, i don't believe, but they need a reason so let them have it"
Posted by beautifulfallenangel on "Tainted Existance" by darth ren
- "religion could've been something of a science ....had it not been corrupted .....although ....sadly.... i fear science is heading down the same path.... made me think.... i like."
Posted by elisa on "Tainted Existance" by darth ren
- "Wow. Wonderful work, can realy relate to this. Excellent structure as well, good control. Love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "My eyes grew teary as I read the ending lines. I know much of what you feel. Lovely yet deeply saddening piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "I love it.. I know exactly how you feel, Love does has its ways. It can really suck, You just gotta stick in there. Lovely piece. |-Ezimo-|"
Posted by D3ADT0WN on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "truly, love is unconditional.......it gives until it hurts.... and then it gives some more.... and more... and more.... until it lashes out in a violent rage of relentless hate......well said"
Posted by elisa on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "*actually* ...all in all, you did rather well with it, and I think some people might get pissed off at me, because I rarely comment on works anymore; ah well, when i find writes that interest me, I comment..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- "...as for the poem, I must say that it kicks its own type of ass, as it appeals to me rather nicely; I also notice your use of language is more than just a few words, which I think is why some of us actual try to rhyme in the first place..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- "this works pretty well; the long lines sometimes let us lose track of the syllables we're using, but it also gives us the leeway to get away with it a bit easier..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
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