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Tainted Existance
By darth ren
this is a repost... i think this is my best
Seeded in their mother’s womb;
Fastened to a cradled doom
To survive death’s mocking sip,
Society seals religion’s grip:
An imperfect portal to Heaven’s gate-
A mindless prison they call fate!
Moral sympathy, mortals stain,
Transforming death to certain pain.
Man’s burdened soul fears fiery tombs
And counters this with worship rooms.
To Him they clasp their hands and pray,
For allowing them to live today.
Treason! to question this soundless voice
Living so blindly, there’s but one choice.
Love this creator of Earth, and now-
To your maker, Zombies bow!
Those with minds of strength resist
But find no purpose to exist.
Hideous Truths, perhaps show why
Man has shaped this inane lie
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© 2006 darth ren
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, BoldSolitude
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wrote:
I liked the 3rd and last stanza's the best. the poem flows so smooth and fast when you are reading it, you have to re-read it to get the depth of it. good write
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On Friday, December 8, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(63) wrote:
beautiful altohugh.....love this
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On Friday, December 8, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(63) wrote:
love this, man has chosen to need a reason for their existance, it's sorta funny, how they react when you say, i don't believe, but they need a reason so let them have it
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On Thursday, December 7, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
religion could've been something of a science ....had it not been corrupted .....although ....sadly.... i fear science is heading down the same path.... made me think.... i like.
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On Wednesday, December 6, 2006, Asouldivided
(22) wrote:
Wonderful, very close to my opinion. I like it very much!
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On Wednesday, December 6, 2006, Cinn
(152) wrote:
I like how this flows and your choice of words, it was a nice read. -Cinn
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