Comments by All Members
- "Its a nice fantasy but fairly uneducated. . . no offense meant but there is volumes more to being a warrior than a simple "kill or be killed" style of thinking. . .and a battlefield is not governed by simply one rule. . and especially not one rule "kill them all". . .I'm not saying war isn't romanticized in films, books and games because I know it is. . .I'm just saying your interpretation is a little bit off the mark is all. . .but it does rhyme and i do enjoy rhyming poetry!"
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "The Art of War" by LOKI
- "I have to agree with everyone else on this - the message is so simple and powerful it really strikes out especially because you don't waste one word in this piece and you haven't overcooked it by thinking it might be 2 short and have to add extra stanzas."
Posted by carlosjackal on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "A band called SPineShank has a song called self-destructive pattern...add an s and i suppose its an original title...I liked this write though..nicely done guy"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Self-Destructive Patterns" by LOKI
- "reflective & beautifull...i have found what i was looking for...& now i can live in peace."
Posted by Unknown on "The Art of War" by LOKI
- "i love this! it's short, sweet, and to the point. and as a bonus, it speaks with the wisdom of someone who (seemingly) has been through alot. ~Lauren~"
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "I like this one,It's the way humankind thinks.:"Hey, that hurt! let's not do that again" You have captured it very well.I might have to watch your works..."
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- " All I can do is agree wtih the others on this. Wonderfully powerful. --Kaosu"
Posted by Unknown on "Rivers Run Red" by LOKI
- "Very nicely done I liked this one. It reminded me of the scars that I have and will always have. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "Every wound
a lesson learned
And the scar reminds you
how much it hurt .. Simple YeT Brilliant ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "this made me cry. its good to cry every once in awhile even for a redneck well done me friend ~ red."
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "Not all scars are visible, but even the ones we carry across the surfaces of our hearts and souls add a weight to the moments we remember and the list of lessons we have learned. Scars are, in my opinion, beautiful...as is this write. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "very wise of you.If we do not learn from them.We would make the same mistakes more than once"
Posted by LOKI on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "This was a very good write. The world is falling down everywhere but it will take people like you to bring light to it. Nicely done!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Dark Philosophy" by LOKI
- "We live in a corrupted world my friend. Its a hard life to live. Fueling your rage only blends in with the rest of the world Benny. Stand For yourself! Live Free and For Whats Right. "
Posted by Unknown on "A Dark Philosophy" by LOKI
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