Comments by All Members
- "On the other hand, what other than this wheel is there? Does human life have a possibility that transcends such inane redundancy? Truly? What are we if not ever desiring... truth, knowledge, contentment, temporary satisfaction, security, name one desiratu"
Posted by Unknown on "Among The Mundane & The Profane" by Temerity
- "*peers deep into the shiny lil forms of light on the screen* it's almost as if I knew you, perhaps we've met on a wheel somewhere? Hmmmm, is there a possibility of non conformity? Is not even the non conformist conforming to a standard of non conformity. "
Posted by Unknown on "Among The Mundane & The Profane" by Temerity
- ""Would you look away?" Woah...the rhyme scheme is gorgeous, the message oh so blunt and clear. If you feel such for someone, there's no reason they would look away or break the moment. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "What If..." by Temerity
- "Wow .... I dont even know what to say .. besides that sounds like love .. :D I mean for those questions to even arise there is something there ... I like it ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "What If..." by Temerity
- "deliberate corruption.....there's only one way to handle that....well said."
Posted by elisa on "Depraver" by Temerity
- "everyone seems to have this door thats locked w/ all the skeletons in the closet, but who has the guts to open that door, and see our lives in their bare form?"
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Decideratum" by Temerity
- "Good overall rhyme scheme. A interesting and refreshing take on the message. Yeah, you definately belong here. Nice work, I really hope you hang around."
Posted by Unknown on "Naked Truths" by Temerity
- "Thank you ShardsofSilence, and I agree that it is limited. This one was far too personal in its origins, and I never completed it. I submitted it to determine if it was worth a finish. ;)"
Posted by Temerity on "Formidable Desire" by Temerity
- "right when i finish reading "i'll never shed the tears" i tears welled up in my eyes...how i wish i could gouge out my eyes...this was great..welcome to dp"
Posted by Unknown on "Naked Truths" by Temerity
- "I half like and half dislike the rhyme. Like because it makes reading it easy, dislike because it seems to limit your words; I felt there could be more to add to this...but it's a good write nonetheless."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Formidable Desire" by Temerity
