Comments by All Members
- "This was amazing. I'll go with Butch down there...killer. Your rhyme was nearly flawless. Great flow and rhythm. Powerful words. I could quote several of these lines but suffice it to say you've done something rare with rhyme. I enjoyed it. --Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Uncharted" by Temerity
- "that is truely beautiful, there are no words to describe it......i love how you respect the beauty of flowers so as to not disturb their content.....great, ~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "He Brings Me Roses" by Temerity
- "things have a way of sucking when they even out, this is the first i have read or heard of you, i will def read more, great one ~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "My Indignation" by Temerity
- "I loved the brilliant tight form of this piece but most of all the way you didn't let that constrict the language, flow and fantastic Alice In Wonderland-influenced imagery used to convey your brilliant message. Bloomin' brilliant!!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Breaking Glass" by Temerity
- "I have had to pass on many things due to smoking being present. I have had to keep my asthmatic son from many places, and from ones I love dearly. I used to be defensive, til I saw enough...and quit. "
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "I see it as a write from an odd and kind of interesting perspective. I think that people have the right to euthanize themselves, or get a quick rush,... but also nicotine is about the most f'n addictive thing."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "'Don't smoke, but war is just fine'. I don't like this topic, not that I didn't think your poem was pertinent and well-delivered...just bothers me, the anti-smoking fascism. -END"
Posted by Unknown on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "Doesn't matter what side of the tracks you come from in my states now. Rich or poor the people have spoken to make it illegal for anyone to smoke in a public establishment (including bars). Socially unacceptable...yes."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- "truthful yes .. but " socially unacceptable " I think not .. most I know smoke .. but this might be a ghetto thing .. were 90% of the comunity smokes *sigh* ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "Smoking Etiquette" by Temerity
- ""Don't bring me flowers. I don't want to watch them die." Beautifully done, I honestly don't even know what to say. Just know I love this.
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Posted by K_Love on "He Brings Me Roses" by Temerity
- "I identify with this. I myself dont care for flowers much and it is sad to see them die. Not to mention giving flowers is so overdone these days."
Posted by soul dancer on "He Brings Me Roses" by Temerity
- "He brought you twelve roses...11 real and 1 fake. He said, I'll leave you until the last one dies. :-) I enjoyed this piece. It was a bittersweet ending ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "He Brings Me Roses" by Temerity
- ""What became of Wonderland?
Where is her King of Hearts?
What to do with the memories,
Just before the panic starts?"i cant stop reading that stanza. the title adds to the fragility of the piece. "
Posted by dying angel on "Breaking Glass" by Temerity
- "I agree with Z, so easily to read and beautifully spoken, each word flowing so perfectly and magically into the next. Heartfelt wonderful write."
Posted by K_Love on "The Minstrel of Truth" by Temerity
- "i really really love this. it grabbed me in such an unusual way...forced me to look upon myself. the flow is just flawless. "If we said everything that we wanted to say"...if only."
Posted by dying angel on "What If..." by Temerity
- "I loved the theme, and the way it flowed, it just rolled on. A touching piece, and teh wording you used to achieve this mental image. Mm. I love it."
Posted by Six-Out on "Breaking Glass" by Temerity
- "gah. that ending was brutal to say the least. I think my heart is about to pound out of my chest."
Posted by Six-Out on "Naked Truths" by Temerity
- "I can't say much. But know that I read, and I'm saying my appreciation. I really need to read more of your work. You're great."
Posted by Six-Out on "Decideratum" by Temerity
- "the meter you used carries the precise pace that the well selected words needed to make this piece magnificent. great write."
Posted by missanthropic on "What If..." by Temerity
- "desiratum or another... can there be a life that does not fall to patterned living of some preconceived style found acceptable and minimally beneficial to the powers that be... to the system as it is? Nice ponderings, I share their sentiment *peers deeply"
Posted by Unknown on "Among The Mundane & The Profane" by Temerity
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