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  • "He might've put her there. Cuss him harder next time and you might get your roses, too."
    Posted by Phalanx on "For Her." by lstdarkness
  • "WOW! my mom is still addicted to almost every drug there is this means alot to me and all my brothers and sisters THANKYOU!!!!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Addiction." by lstdarkness
  • "so sad that one would prefer death by their own hand that what life has to offer. be strong, hold on. you have a purpose here; not yet achieved"
    Posted by natalie on "Drowning" by lstdarkness
  • "it was very good, i think. it had a certain rhythm to it that seems to suck you in."
    Posted by Unknown on "Finished." by lstdarkness
  • "*sigh* It was like my heart snapped the rest of the way and I was wondering what I felt before, but as your words came at the end, I was just drowned in sadness.."
    Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Lost" by lstdarkness
  • "The ending made me smile, it was fast beat and I could see it displayed in my mind.. Its great when someone can pull you out and give you the freedom of the person you always could have been, but its much sweeter when its someone you care for... "
    Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Just like running into a brickwall." by lstdarkness
  • "I find it very interesting how true yet contrary the aspects of succumbing to the overwhelming can be. Succinctly, but well demonstrated."
    Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Lost" by lstdarkness
  • "That final line was like stepping off the edge of the world, into oblivion."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Lost" by lstdarkness
  • "I felt like the room was getting darker as I read this. excellent write. ~Silver~"
    Posted by Unknown on "Lost" by lstdarkness
  • "OUCH! It put me in the moment. I hope "mom" recovered OK. I'm wondering - was Pap oblivious to the attempts? Or, was he watching with a grin? I have to share this with my wife...more as an ounce of prevention than the good read it is!!!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Tonights Main Event: Mom vs. The Fan of Doom" by lstdarkness
  • "nice, you've captured time so perfectly, this is life and no matter how hard we try "sheep" will always follow the newest gadjets or fashion trends. but it is up to us to not follow but to lead, but you used "U" instead of "you" at the end, kind of takes "
    Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Sheep." by lstdarkness
  • "haha, my dog chases it's tail.....good write..~*dani*~ your right this country is sick, and we blow all our money on war, it discusts me"
    Posted by GraveFlower on "Random" by lstdarkness
  • "eh, girls are bitches, i hate liars, i just resently lost one a my bf's cause she is a back stabber *cough cough xox-sabrina-xox* yea, drop her, it may be hard, but do whats best, good write ~*dani*~"
    Posted by GraveFlower on "Honesty" by lstdarkness
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