Comments by All Members
- "every portrait you painted here will linger foralways before my eyes, the haunting clarity of walking away from someone, leaving them in pain...I know how it is to watch a person disappear...and to leave someone behind. Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Fields Like Oceans (How Many?)" by Fading_Smile
- ""as he picks black roses off of scars he wont remember. an epitaph in a poem that could never say he misses her" and "he will walk away tonight, for ever fire must go out on its own"...damn..."
Posted by Unknown on "Fields Like Oceans (How Many?)" by Fading_Smile
- "Remember . Just because your on Darkpoetry doesnt mean it has to be dark. Back to the writing. The Feeling of being so close to someone yet so far apart is such a saddening thing. Why stay with the person if the bad out weighs the good? ][ ][ "
Posted by Unknown on "A Distant Embrace" by Fading_Smile
- "Excellent piece. If I only had the talent you have at 17, Oh Lord some of the things I would do. You have a sharp tongue my friend. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "I loved the first stanze. How you were just straight forward yet open about holding back true feeling. So many times have yurned to speak my feelings out loud yet always seemed to place my thaughts through metaphores of my poetry."
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "Wow, I usually hate reading suicide poems reason being, I used to write so many in my prime. Yet I saw this poem's brilliance past the twisted ending. "
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- ""And both heart and home face much greyer skies" *sighs* Wowzers, you've blown me away with this, your portrayal of a sunset excellently done to match the message your words send out. Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Paint the Clouds With Matchsticks" by Fading_Smile
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