Fields Like Oceans (How Many?)

By Fading_Smile

There is no eulogy worthy of utterance
for a man blind enough to burn down a forest,
a man who would have traded tears for bullets,
so close and so far away from home


He stands in crowded and lonely fields like oceans,
ash and flowers twirl as if refusing to be forgotten,
carrying empty bottles for love letters to drown in
as petals fall softly, like an echo of an echo


Fate and rain emancipate lies in every whisper
as he picks black roses off of scars he won't remember,
an epitaph in a poem that could never say he misses her,
"another day, another cut", was all he carved in stone


Swallowing bandages so he might heal inside,
for like the forest, heart and euthanasia abide,
alive and dead, he will walk away tonight,
for every fire must go out on its own



Yes,
I'm the man who burned down the forest,
and I'm sorry I left you with nothing
but an ocean, of bones

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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Published on Thursday, November 30, 2006.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • Morbid_insanity On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Morbid_insanity (74)By person wrote:

    You are like to freakin awesome. This is some good stuff "swallowed bandages" its like to genius. Freakin Awesome. ~Josh

  • A former member wrote: "as he picks black roses off of scars he wont remember. an epitaph in a poem that could never say he misses her" and "he will walk away tonight, for ever fire must go out on its own"...damn...

  • A former member wrote: every portrait you painted here will linger foralways before my eyes, the haunting clarity of walking away from someone, leaving them in pain...I know how it is to watch a person disappear...and to leave someone behind. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, November 30, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    This first stanza brought 'Wish you where here' right to the front of my mind. "An epitaph in a poem the could never say he misses her," Beautiful, man. Still a big fan. Write on.

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, November 30, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Blake, wow this is beyond phenomenal! You broke my heart in so many places. This is really something special, kinda like you! Julia~

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