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- ""In order to live our hearts must bleed" such a true statement. and the question your asking is so hard to face. because for those of us who've tasted sorrow at its worse we know that bitterness that's stays stuck inside our throats. you amaze me."
Posted by dying angel on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile
- "beautiful. the only advice i have for you is to fix up this one stanza--the one that begins 'now living'...it just didn't seem to fit quite right to me. if you don't mind cristism. the rest, my darling, was astounding!
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile
- "Yes I'm not one for hyperbole but I love you, you little tinker, you deliciously verdant rolling Spring-kissing corpse licking son-of-a gun. Oh by the way, the poem was ok....HA HA HA!!! Sorry about that."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile
- ""Maybe next time you see a flower/you will remember I'm buried in your backyard" This is beautifully woven...an intricacy of heartache mingling with not wanting to grow elsewhere. Beautiful. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "There's a Cemetery Behind Your House" by Fading_Smile
- "i used to cut. being able to let go of the emotional pain and focus on the physical is so much easier. but relief only lasts a few minutes. then the pain comes back double. thanks for posting this."
Posted by dying angel on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
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