Comments by All Members
- "i can't write only one sentence that took my breath away because i would end up writing the entire thing.. it was purely amazing. astonishing. brilliant and so very very deep .. never ending. it was beautiful. you deserve poem of the day! thank you so much for sharing.."
Posted by Unknown on "Paint the Clouds With Matchsticks" by Fading_Smile
- "i love the line, "where birds swim in unpainted oceans and watercolors paint my surroundings at whim". reminds me of dreams i once had, very well written!"
Posted by Unknown on "Apostrophe to Imagination" by Fading_Smile
- ""Somewhere between art and a funeral" Sombre w/ excellent texture (& some good internal rhyme). Love the title... I only dislike the last line, the question, as I've heard it before (I'm not saying that "P" word; just the concept - it's the only line I'd try and make more original). I like all the rest, espc. the line I quoted: that's very original! Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Scars and Raincoats: Still Drowning" by Fading_Smile
- "a strange prose poem...its fractures have split the kaleidoscope then brought them back as a whole; there is a subconscious presentation of ideas that breifely work some magic charm...curiously offbeat and charming"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Apostrophe to Imagination" by Fading_Smile
- "I have no clue what to say..you've pretty much summed it all up. You have an incredible talent not only with expression but with your use of every word under the sun... ~Lost"
Posted by Unknown on "On the Edge of the Ocean" by Fading_Smile
- ""and I fell in love with/the sunset behind you" The imagery in this is excellent...every line another pillar of strength holding up your heartstrings. Wonderful. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "On the Edge of the Ocean" by Fading_Smile
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