Comments by All Members
- "without doubt the kind of poetry I hope I'm gonna click on and read; the hallucegenic trip of the freefalling language, loved up in this morphine dreamscape with yellow stars and such vivid slinky imaginative entangles..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "morphine kiss." by kiss of the dark
- ""let's dance in
the empty bedsheets
and cause
yellow stars to
destroy themselves." so many lines stuck out to me in this piece. you're imagery is quite incredible. the title is perfection."
Posted by dying angel on "morphine kiss." by kiss of the dark
- "Oh my Gawd! I loved this, and I loved it even more because it was about Morphine. But... I also loved it because it was creative. "
Posted by Unknown on "morphine kiss." by kiss of the dark
- ""...her face resembled
shattered windows" This is a stunningly gothic & gorgeous poem, as pure as any prose should be. The passion is deep & "sweetly dark"; I feel the gardens & Chandeliers you whisper into fragments "like a delicate silken ferris wheel""
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Chandeliers." by kiss of the dark
- "Wow... amazing piece, i came to read today because i was feeling abandoned and lonely and this piece, it may sound cliche, came to me, you told the story so smoothly and gently but it made such an impact."
Posted by stargaze0991 on "Broken Chandeliers." by kiss of the dark
- "ouch. i dont know what to say. this was brilliant. i think many of us can relate to this. i know i can. it hurts when you put your trust in someones hands and they drop you without a thought."
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Chandeliers." by kiss of the dark
- ""~You smile gently with/the growing red horizon and realize.../I am rescued from/this garden of regret.**" This is portrayed in imagery so beautiful, I can hardly bear looking at it...and yet, I must. Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Rotting Rose" by kiss of the dark
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