morphine kiss.
By kiss of the dark
we danced on the
the empty canvas,
leaving gorgeous
stains of
words we only
dare to whisper.
tangible music
flows from our
spiraling eyes,
irises reflecting
firecracker suns
and
comatose daisies.
your sweet
morphine tongue
caresses mine,
and I fall
in your arms
to hopefully
keep the room
from spinning.
[you make me dizzy.]
our daydreams are
mounted in color
as this impressionist
waltz prolongs...
and the painting reminds you...
of the vivid
mental picture
you take so eagerly
as the sun sets
on its earthly perch,
thus surrendering
to self-detonation
and giving
birth to twilight.
[i want to make a
massacre of this evening]
let's dance in
the empty bedsheets
and cause
yellow stars to
destroy themselves.
let me taste your
morphine kiss one last time.
Comments on "morphine kiss."
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A former member wrote:
this is amazing
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was exquisite..
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On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
god damn, somtimes we miss the good stuff, you capture hearts and got a style i dig, kudos dead poet
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On Tuesday, January 2, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
This poem makes me picture a strange but beatiful fantasy world. I loved it!
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On Tuesday, January 2, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
a sweet dance it is, i am inspired
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A former member wrote:
transcends into a beautiful capture & flows like film...this is great! very creative. great write!
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On Monday, January 1, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This was insanely beautiful.
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On Monday, January 1, 2007, alaskanamber
(64) wrote:
I loved the beauty of it aside from the halucinations, those are fun too =)
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A former member wrote:
Oh my Gawd! I loved this, and I loved it even more because it was about Morphine. But... I also loved it because it was creative.