Rotting Rose

By kiss of the dark


Stuck inside this
rotting rose,
the petals slowly closing in,
the smell of beauty decomposing...

how I hate the scent.

Deep, thick crimson
devastation crumbles into
a black renaissance,
the birth of its death...

...and of my own too.

Borne out of the
thin, pallid embers
of a winter morn,
you come across
this rotting rose,
and peel away at my
hideous hideaway.

Eyes black,
the neglected color
of my skin and
my red lips--they torture
your very being,

I save you.

"You're a fucking goddess."

Your haunting lips
and grotesque vocals,
serenade the wint'ry
travesties into a
heap of ripe, warm
soul shine.

You save me.

Blistered thorns soften
at the sight of
the sun...

(as do I.)

**As I bloom in full,

~You smile gently with
the growing red horizon and realize...

I am rescued from
this garden of regret.**

and

...you are free from
this soul-less torment.~

we are saved.



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© 2006 kiss of the dark
Published on Wednesday, October 4, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Bella Butchery On Monday, February 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    ditto wonder

  • A former member wrote: that was absolutely beautiful. very moving.

  • A former member wrote: Breathstealing.

  • mozarts cat On Wednesday, October 4, 2006, mozarts cat (183)By person wrote:

    absolutely stunning!

  • A former member wrote: Hhm!? This was calming, beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: "~You smile gently with/the growing red horizon and realize.../I am rescued from/this garden of regret.**" This is portrayed in imagery so beautiful, I can hardly bear looking at it...and yet, I must. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

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