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- "so ironic... i have the same fading relationship with my mom... and although she is on her 4th marriage, i believe that she is just as alone as i am. thank you for sharing this with the world. i read it three times in a row. "
Posted by Unknown on "Similar" by Lythodaemil
- ".....i know if i continue reading and re-read the last three stanza's it will eventually click to just read it differently, but i just thought i'd let you know...cause it came off REAL confusing at firt...and well written ;)"
Posted by sIo on "Untitled" by Lythodaemil
- "i'm going to be bold and make a suggestion....third to last stanza 'free yourself/the depression of life' okay the way i read that it says you're freeing yourself from that place going INTO the depression of life...."
Posted by sIo on "Untitled" by Lythodaemil
- "You need to dedicate yourself to letting go of your destructive past.I know that's a hard thing to do, but you will be better off in the long run. I appreciate the way you shared your feelings, by the way."
Posted by Thorn on "Confused" by Lythodaemil
- "Well, what do ya know? That's exactly how I'm feeling right at the moment. I love the last stanza. Sums up all the internal conflict. Nice write. - Laura"
Posted by RunningVein on "Confused" by Lythodaemil
- "I love the way this piece tangs of someone who is normally very hard and proud and for them to feel unrequited love, takes a very special person indeed. Excellent write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "To Fang, With Love" by Lythodaemil
- "this has shown me what you were talking about.. cause i looked at the title and was like huh? anyways, it was a good poem and very moving.. to know that you can force yourself down and the same time free yourself while someone else is making you sick to y"
Posted by mywristshurt on "I Am Free" by Lythodaemil
- "I like the aimple rough honesty, but got hung up on the 3rd line- seemed you were not sure of your stance...you present? your presence?..my will? to last,...I like the graphic use of standard tool, like a castout in the woods, with pocketknife.Eww like th"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "I Am Free" by Lythodaemil
- ""You were a parasite/And I purged you from my chest with my rightful pocket knife" there was a quiet passion in this that seemed to build up as i continued to read..sort of a ringing triumph. great write."
Posted by Unknown on "I Am Free" by Lythodaemil
- "this pangs with unrequited love... a hand from out of the dark searching endlesly for requite... respite... for someone to hold."
Posted by Unknown on "To Fang, With Love" by Lythodaemil
- "dont hope to much because someone once told me (poem: What Happened To my Heart) that once your heart breaks, it crumbles.. i dont want that to happen to you"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Of You" by Lythodaemil
- "g try to succeed in life and dont let anyone tell you who or what to be... you have a great writing talent, so please dont let it go to waste.. if you need me, im a dp mail away"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Tired" by Lythodaemil
- "i wouldn't go that far because if anything to live for in life, it's to count your scars.. we might have our "If only I were dead..." moments, but it doesn't mean we have to die.. just live through it and dont look behind you after each step... if anythin"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Tired" by Lythodaemil
- "amazing.. i know where you're coming from because i too am coming from a past relationship that screwed me over.. and yet im still in love.. nice piece"
Posted by mywristshurt on "I Need You" by Lythodaemil
- "and this piece reminds me of that. i can relate to the narrator all to well in being weary in the way observed. ty for sharing; ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Tired" by Lythodaemil
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