To Fang, With Love

By Lythodaemil

Thoughts of you never escape my mind.
You think you have found some one better than me.
I hate to say my intuition suggests otherwise.

Many believe I can be more for you.
I know I can be more for you.
My wish is that you could see all that I see in you.

You have so much potential and I want to show you that you ARE beautiful.
I accept you for everything you are, and this statement cannot be truer.
Please think this over, what do you really feel for me.

You still love me.
I am certain you do.
The way we hug.
The way you cherish every moment I'm with you after being gone so long.

I can't help but be frustrated when I know things are wrong can’t see they need to be fixed.
To better myself I have taken on a burden for you.
I see a therapist once a week to fix what is wrong with me.
I will not be so depressed anymore.
If you and I were together, neither of us would have to be depressed anymore.

I can do things for you that may never come from elsewhere.
I want to help you achieve your life goal.
I want you to know how happy you and I can be together.
To know I would never hurt or abandon you.

Ask your friends and mine, they are honest.
If I was a bitch then they would say so, but I’m not.
I am the most loyal person you will ever know, I am certain of it.
Once I give my heart to someone, it’s theirs to have and I never get it back.

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© 2006 The Unwanted One
Published on Wednesday, June 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Rant"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, October 30, 2006, carlosjackal (2785)By person wrote:

    I love the way this piece tangs of someone who is normally very hard and proud and for them to feel unrequited love, takes a very special person indeed. Excellent write.

  • A former member wrote: this pangs with unrequited love... a hand from out of the dark searching endlesly for requite... respite... for someone to hold.

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