Comments by All Members
- "have you ever read the sun also rises by hemingway? this sort of perspective reminds me alot of that. just so you know. "
Posted by Mari on "Walter" by johntaiyu
- "im starting to wonder why no one comments on you. i think your wonderfully insightful, in a detached sort of way. which is the best way. of course."
Posted by Mari on "Red" by johntaiyu
- "i don't know if i should look away or read this a second time. this felt to me, like a private thought. a naked statement made between you and your conscience. such a naked piece. short but brutal. "
Posted by dying angel on "Run for Cigarettes" by johntaiyu
- "wow; stately wished and worded. . .a simple clearcut snippet of life and love and longing in such an everyday ordeal; you captured it nicely. ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Run for Cigarettes" by johntaiyu
- "love the straightforward.ness, the skin.tight and well.worn words work so well here; simplistic....succinct... secluded and so real; velveteen......thoughtful piece .ness.
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Posted by Unknown on "Corner" by johntaiyu
- "I wasn't sure what to expect with the title...I was pleasantly surprised at how easily I could relate to this..except our cows were never too tall ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Tall Cows" by johntaiyu
- "=) I thoroughly enjoyed this, with its lightness of touch and those last lines left me grinning from ear-to-ear. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Tall Cows" by johntaiyu
- "...I loved this and at the same time it had me shaking in tears. So many of my best friends are gone over there and the last thing I can stand to think about is losing them to the war. And AMEN to that bruises."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Hero" by johntaiyu
- "This really makes a statement. It's so true, thoes boys deserve better. How come you're not old enough to drink, but you're old enough to die? "
Posted by Unknown on "Hero" by johntaiyu
- "wow.... the curvature of absolute......every word perfectly intact....amazing... and then some."
Posted by elisa on "Corner" by johntaiyu
- "jeesh..my mom tells me I'm a genuine pack-rat...perhaps the fact is that throwing things away feels like I'm letting go of memories forever. The imagery in this is excellent...it hit home, hard. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Corner" by johntaiyu
- "*sighs* jeeze...I have felt these fears before...believing that you could not possibly be meant to hold something (or someone) for the rest of forever, because you did nothing to deserve such a fairytale ending. Wonderful. As always. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Running From Ghosts" by johntaiyu
- "a sharp cry from Sothis (Sirius).......... words that mark a footprint journey through Canis Major.....i simply love the details. ...this is beautiful."
Posted by elisa on "Dogstars and the Sea" by johntaiyu
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