Inch or Two

By johntaiyu



Waking up
never stopped
I just quit noticing
much except
whatever there was
an inch or two
from my face

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© 2007 johntaiyu
Published on Thursday, March 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • stormtalk On Thursday, March 29, 2007, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    This has all the forceful impact of a Zen koan. Thank you for posting.

  • Carnapharnelia On Thursday, March 29, 2007, Carnapharnelia (14)By person wrote:

    So short, but so sad and sweet.

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