Comments by All Members
- "Yeah, this is why I keep quiet. It's useless if no one cares enough to listen to yuor empty words."
Posted by Unknown on "My Bruised Lips" by frileyma
- "The truth about use of language by people...
Animals use language to inform...
people use it for many other purposes....
including poetry by the way :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The End" by frileyma
- "great picture formed out of that, and great poem....write on...."
Posted by Unknown on "Arson" by frileyma
- "Nice, it sounds like the opening course of a badass metal song, thanks for the write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Arson" by frileyma
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This work made me feel all peaceful about death. A wierd feeling. But this was a great work I rather enjoyed it"
Posted by Unknown on "When I Die" by frileyma
- "Such a peaceful aspect to Death, love. It is one I wish others would take on my death, though I doubt that will happen. Anyways... Nice write and very well constructed. ~Melodies"
Posted by melodies revisited on "When I Die" by frileyma
- "i drew subtleties describing the loneliness of separation from between the lines of vitriol... blame?...
an excellent work that can read from a couple different contextual points of view."
Posted by Jonas on "My Bruised Lips" by frileyma
- "Me and my ex-wife had the same issue. It just took us a while to figure it out. Great right, simple, but effective"
Posted by AnarKoRn on "The End" by frileyma
- "This is actually really good. It's so short and simple & yet it conveys your message with the most supreme impact. Well done."
Posted by Lolita on "The End" by frileyma
- "Should make the break up a piece of cake...you do like cake dont you."
Posted by Unknown on "The End" by frileyma
- "Excellent voquilism(no idea if that's a word, but sounds nice.) in this piece. Much appreciated, entertaining ten minutes. See you around."
Posted by Skye on "Drought and Sin" by frileyma
- "Oh dear twisted one.....nice. "Smoking, drinking and anal sex? There's far more things worse than that."
Posted by inruins on "I Love You" by frileyma
- "0_0 wow..this was quite mocking..and the repeting of "pretty" really worked with the flow. nice job. "Christ, what I could do with a hammer"- that line made me giggle."
Posted by Unknown on "My Bruised Lips" by frileyma
- ""Women make our men
Who make our gods" "We are not dreams of murder
We are the mothers of the dreamers"so many many many good lines here..Such anguish..such sorrow.beautiful if i may say so."
Posted by redtearswhitesnow on "Cry of an Angry Woman" by frileyma
- "slightly better than lies eh?this is so short but it speaks volumes.The last four lines are like a puzzle..i play them over in my head and it just hurts.Its there in the truth yet it is so far away from being solved.this is written very well."
Posted by redtearswhitesnow on "You Never Said Yes" by frileyma
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