For NanaBanana Who Won't Get It

By frileyma

My half-crazed god
Spinning, dizzy
Leaves me begging, pleading
Give me my wings,
My crooked wings
I cannot fly.

Her arms are empty
She is screaming
I am falling
Sobbing, twisting
She must catch me
I cannot fly.

God, Man, Goddamn
She is watching
He is sleeping
Does he know I am dying
She will never leave me
I cannot fly.

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Published on Monday, October 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, October 27, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Sweet write.. Left me dizzy

  • mysticventures On Monday, October 10, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    yes, yes excellent piece

  • Nail Bunny On Monday, October 10, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    A great piece of work. the repetition "I cannot fly." is awesome.

  • redtearswhitesnow On Monday, October 10, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (79)By person wrote:

    "God, Man, Goddamn" i love it,keep up the good work.

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