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When I Die
By frileyma
I will move through
Water
I will move through
Sky
I will move
Into
Over
and
Around
I will move on
and
On
I will be ashes flying
Forward
Forever
I will swirl and surrender
To wind and her whim
I will be what was
What is
I will be singing
Aching
Breathing
Smiling
Broken me
Being
Softly
I still am
Now
and
Then
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© 2009 frileyma
Published on Wednesday, May 27, 2009.
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A former member wrote:
As will I now and again. It reminds me of a marriage vow.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2015, Nimue44
(296)
wrote:
Soothing. Willows made of pillows, satin stardust. Beautiful.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2015, Uley Bone
(25) wrote:
Nicely done, and congrats on getting poem of the day.
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A former member wrote:
This work made me feel all peaceful about death. A wierd feeling. But this was a great work I rather enjoyed it
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On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, Enough
(17) wrote:
Amazing...Great write
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On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, melodies revisited
(30) wrote:
Such a peaceful aspect to Death, love. It is one I wish others would take on my death, though I doubt that will happen. Anyways... Nice write and very well constructed. ~Melodies
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