Arson

By frileyma

"Arson"

Fires blaze
Through fields
Of men like trees
Never moving
I am clean
I am cold
I am dreaming
Ashes of old boyfriends
I want to know
What are you thinking?
Are you thinking
Of burning?

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M.S.E. Berger
Published on Monday, October 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: great picture formed out of that, and great poem....write on....

  • HeadpatSlut On Thursday, April 8, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Nice, it sounds like the opening course of a badass metal song, thanks for the write. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Well written. I love descriptive work Scholar

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, October 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    hmmm... probably fair enough... men burnt witches for less... I'm not sure who the "you" is in your question.

  • Nail Bunny On Monday, October 10, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    I am always thinking of burning! the imagery is fantastic... a wonderful job.

  • redtearswhitesnow On Monday, October 10, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (79)By person wrote:

    Are you thinking of burning.I dont know why but when i read this i feel a sense of sadism.The concept of this is pretty original.Well done.

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