Comments by All Members
- "I like this very much! You are very good at writing long prose that has continuos, connected meaning. The blood references seem very real, and moving to me."
Posted by leluna on "Cold Blood Runs" by CrestfallenTears
- "4) what do you mean by not equal? 5) because the more challenging it is the more appealing. 6) because pregnant mums who get shot didn't want to kill their babies in the first place. lmao."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "JustAThought...or two," by CrestfallenTears
- "1) never heard of that expression actually 2)because too many people are describing their suicidal moments by cutting, no one's utilised the noose yet! 3)because men are pigs and they like to be sandwiched."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "JustAThought...or two," by CrestfallenTears
- "hmm....not quite my point.......he is just my example of the hypocrisy most prolife people tend to buy in to...i don't understand why prolife people think they should be able to control what others do w/ there body.....reminds me of religious 'do gooders"
Posted by elisa on "JustAThought...or two," by CrestfallenTears
- "...besides how many civilian casualties(pregnant women included) do you think he is responsible for at this point? there is a lot of hypocrisy in the system:) How'd i do;)"
Posted by elisa on "JustAThought...or two," by CrestfallenTears
- "all good questions....i'll take a stab at #5 How can our Republican Prolife president declare war on two countries and still be considered Prolife..."
Posted by elisa on "JustAThought...or two," by CrestfallenTears
- ""You tell me you still love me/and I am sure that is very much true./But you are moving on/and I am not over you." Your rhyme scheme amazes me...not too supportive of your ending, but this is beautiful nonetheless. *Evangel* "
Posted by Unknown on "Too Deep" by CrestfallenTears
- "I can honestly say, I liked almost every line of this poem. "You were like my ciggarettes and razor times three.", "I will put an end to your pain, with mine." And I love it how everything makes sense, and I know what you mean."
Posted by Unknown on "All Of It Is Gone Now" by CrestfallenTears
- "I love how your poems are always so true, understandable, real, and how I can know exactly what you mean. I like the concept of this poem too. I usually say 'luv ya' when I want to say 'Love you' without meaning it."
Posted by Unknown on "Luv Ya" by CrestfallenTears
- "It's not the razors that make you feel better, it's the endorphins that your body makes in reaction to injury. This being written in such a defensive manner makes me think that you are still fighting yourself, no matter how good it feels. "
Posted by Raven on "Razors, and Scissors, and Blood, oh my!" by CrestfallenTears
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