Comments by All Members

"That last stanza brought it all together like a complete full circle,..left with nothing but an empty void."
Posted by Unknown on "Implanted Seed" by RubyXero

"where has your fight gone?.. reminds me ok: "you're too strong to surrender, but you're far too frail to fight"-mewithoutYou... good write...i like the way it flows..."
Posted by heroineyes on "Implanted Seed" by RubyXero

"internal....intelligent....flow of prose.........well done"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Implanted Seed" by RubyXero

"Vivid imagery. Definitely liked this one. Plus it helps that vermillion happens to be one of my favorite words. Lovely, really."
Posted by wilted on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero

"An absolutely wonderful work that twisted this way and that, keeping me clinging to every word. Thrilling. And kudos on the excellent vocabulary."
Posted by wilted on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"A fine dark treasure to read on a cool pretentious morning; sitting behind my desk and taking a "poetry brake". ;)"
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero

"Seemed like the climax of a fairy tale. This feels like it needs more after the first read, but after I re-read it, and let it simmer, it left a comfortable feeling and a soothing blanket of contentment. A very pleasing read."
Posted by MESUN on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero

"thank you for your kind words. i appreciate it...it does get easier as time goes by. challenging...but i am strong. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Fade Out" by RubyXero

"kept me clinging on to each coming word, beautiful crimson fluency and a pleasantly sharp ending. Wonderful work (and thank you for the welcome to DP!) It's a pleasure to be able to read your work ~Downstream~"
Posted by Withering petals on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"I have read some of your other works, in particular "Embrace to the heartache" in order to try and understand what you must be going through, on occasions of significance you must feel alone, as a matter of fact on occasions of in-significance you must feel.. most alone, for those are the times when you're most in thought, i wish for you post haste in 'release date', so that you may 'feel'...once again."
Posted by Unknown on "Fade Out" by RubyXero

"A dimensional roller-coaster of emotional highs, lows, and spikes of thought, i liked..."
Posted by Unknown on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero

"It's nice to see how we all feel about this site put into words. Very Well done. -Heather-"
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "For Every Single Poet" by RubyXero

"omg. that was awesome. ^_^ kudos on the writing. thnx fer the comments."
Posted by Unknown on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"Incredible write....erotic....animalistic yet humane. "
Posted by Unknown on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"HA!... maybe i'll convert. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"Yes, yes, yes, yes, fucking yes! Now that just pulled me along and WHAM! That last stanza and final verse, damn, amazing. I felt the cold and I felt the comfort of being back bed, and then the fear and excitement. Awesome."
Posted by MESUN on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"I'm definitely in tune with the last bit, that's why i use a mechanical pencil and carry a extra lead in my pocket."
Posted by MESUN on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"nicely done. i like the 2nd stanza"
Posted by Syringe on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"Oh My Fucking God This Is Hot. It Sent Shivers Up My Spine, Thanks For The Read!"
Posted by Chaos God on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"I just wonder, would it have been his "pleas" or his "please". HA! Amusing and chilling all at once."
Posted by Sketso on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"Kinky...LOL, me likes :) I love the way the tension builds up and the way you delivered the last part. Ice cold yet blazing hot."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"Strap me in baby, i'm up for some demonic sex, I think the 'exorcist scene' said it best "fuck me...fuck me"...and i'll scream... if you do too. - hmmm feel like some pop corn now...enjoyed;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"In-*expletive*-credible. I haven't read something that has appealed this much to me on here in a while. *Tips hat twice*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"I like the last line.. I saw the void once.. it was the most beautiful thing I've ever known.. I hope that's where we go when we die.. it was so peaceful and at rest.."
Posted by Unknown on "Everlasting" by RubyXero

"Lovin The End Here Dear..."
Posted by Chaos God on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"You'll find the words, they never really leave. They linger, they change, they dance around you but they're there. An interesting way to express uncertainty."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"I know exactly what you wrote, said, and meant..very real, very nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"vocal depletion ... a hard recovery indeed. nicely done"
Posted by elisa on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

"Nice write. This--"This sudden empty critique has left me. scribbling away thoughts and deleting rows." i love "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero

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