Comments by All Members
- "Lovely portrayal of aloneness. Your expression was enlightening and off your beaten path in flow. I loved it. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts from Mary" by RubyXero
- "The emptiness I feel inside this piece almost creates an echo when I read your words aloud. Beautiful and raw, I love it.--Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts from Mary" by RubyXero
- "Brilliant! Each line felt more powerful than the one before. And as I read the words seem to get louder and more violent! Brutal truth with personal random rays of hope... "
Posted by sixsixnine on "The Slothful" by RubyXero
- "Good god, that was brutal... a dark and emotional piece, well done... fine structure and flow, thank-you for sharing "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Slothful" by RubyXero
- "this was a battle cry to me... I thought I heard artillery as I read.... time to wage against the slovenly.... to rise against the mundane... the banality and trite distractions that perpetuate this crime against what humanity could be..... nice write... full of fire and fuel. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Slothful" by RubyXero
- "Wow, such a powerful piece...I found myself in a similar situation...though my child...was torn from me...A good write."
Posted by Unknown on "I Wont Ask" by RubyXero
- "I'm with you on this...and I wish...for karma to to do a smack down!! *hugs you* Really great write here. Got me all emotional."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Flip of the Coin" by RubyXero
- "concise, revealing, and some parts I can relate to. Sounds like you're on the path to your own salvation. Maybe we all find it in the end."
Posted by ANGELSLAYER on "Faithless One..." by RubyXero
- "sounds like the last hell i was in...at least i thought it was hell. i'm sure i have yet to actually find it. nevertheless a good write."
Posted by MESUN on "Love is....." by RubyXero
- "Sometimes a band-aid just won't do it. Still it flows and flows. So great Ruby! awesome write. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Love is....." by RubyXero
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