Comments by All Members
- "nice rhythm and poignant lines, i especially love the last stanza. the distress you convey feels familiar...I know your pain. -Leila "
Posted by raspberry89 on "For A Girl" by Jazz Daffy
- "Who can you depend on but yourself when all others have failed you? Though I have been here before, I'm trying to stray from that kind of "balance". Nice write."
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "Balance" by Jazz Daffy
- "Woah...Why has this only comments and a bookmark from Kristie? *shakes fist at DP members* A lost gem of a poem. Wonderful piece :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Roots in Wet Soil" by Jazz Daffy
- "This one is heavy. And not in a hippy "whoa man, that's deep" sorta way. No. This one has weight."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Who" by Jazz Daffy
- "reading it once wasn't enough.
it's still calling me back for one more view..."
Posted by Unknown on "Who" by Jazz Daffy
- "and i hope u won that war.
good wording, very nice-and hi."
Posted by Unknown on "Who" by Jazz Daffy
- "That was an awesome write. I was completely encapsulated in your story, the ending was abrupt but I suppose that does happen (being based on a true fornication). Strongly displays emotions that I think are universal, the waiting, while parts are unique, "
Posted by Unknown on "Binary" by Jazz Daffy
- "Tragic and oh so sad. I wish I could say I didn't relate to this, but I cannot. I was drawn in by the title, but your words kept me reading! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Binary" by Jazz Daffy
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