i was drunk off my ass when i wrote this
By Jazz Daffy
A million words i've written
To form descriptions of ghosts
Unappreciative of crimes never known
Still i work to see
In a way of being solemn and formed
In a pressure of ten and nine
In a feeling of sidelines and motherly sort of care
He held me stronger
And kissed me longer
And i came harder
Than before with a flow of words so clean
In barless cages
And bladeless edges
On plates i would show everyone but him
In my bed, places that fade
Into people and things
Songs of vague entry
And numbers which give no meaning to their name
I'll never know
And neither will you
If you ever figure this out...
i'll suck your dick
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Published on Wednesday, March 15, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
Good work I like
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
you must not have been that drunk this is really good. my favorite is also elisa's favorite
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, to love a psycho
(19) wrote:
i agree with elisa my favorite though is in barless cages and bladeless edges on plates i would show everyone but him keep it up :)
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
that's pretty damn coherent for being drunk.... i'm impressed...... i love the last two lines so much .. i'm not even gonna comment...... but the copyright just kisses it perfectly;)