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Roots in Wet Soil
By Jazz Daffy
Once upon a sunny day
I planted lilies in my mother's shoes
But i came only to mourn
So they feared the sun
And grew underground
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Copyright 2005 Jess
Published on Wednesday, September 14, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
So... sweetly somber. Excellent.- Div
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On Wednesday, December 24, 2008, carlosjackal
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Woah...Why has this only comments and a bookmark from Kristie? *shakes fist at DP members* A lost gem of a poem. Wonderful piece :) -Carl
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A former member wrote:
I still hold this one dear.
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A former member wrote:
..yes, I love this.
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A former member wrote:
I adore this...every word. It's everything I want to be, all the pretty things in my head, in five lines. Minimalism. Delicious. *love*
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A former member wrote:
Thank you. ..so much. I'll look at this every time I frown.
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