Who

By Jazz Daffy

Everything is fine
Don't worry, and
Once again
I can chill past the bone
Will you follow my shift in silence
Or carry the weight of this symbiotic mess
I side-checked your merry way
And i doubt, somehow
That your best intentions will remain on my side

Yesterday, i declared war on indecisiveness
In the hopes that my overdrawn heart
And your chaotic apathy
Might meet in a way that makes a little more sense

And doesn't keep ending in all these fucking tears

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for mario
Published on Saturday, November 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Alanarchy On Sunday, November 12, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    This one is heavy. And not in a hippy "whoa man, that's deep" sorta way. No. This one has weight.

  • A former member wrote: reading it once wasn't enough. it's still calling me back for one more view...

  • Aunty Depressant On Saturday, November 11, 2006, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    Arghhh! attraction to the fickle is a frustration indeed!

  • A former member wrote: and i hope u won that war. good wording, very nice-and hi.

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