Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight

By Bella Butchery

I can see you hardly miss me
As much as I miss you
You ruined everything
She walks with an axe in hand tonight
My words missed your heart
And went too deep
I thought you might have died

Desperate lung torn collision
She walks with an axe in hand tonight

Weight of the blade
Screaming pavment pursuit
relentless bloody
matted hair, dirt smirk
....The heart severer....

Cleave

Touchtone memories
Suspended in dive bars
For a condescending audience
Both of us will never leave this place alive

….a portrait …
Maybe an ink stained something….

Sit amongst the crows
A skeleton white wash
In the warmth
Of dull flickered lights
“lets get fucked up”
And chase dreams across
Flat-lined cynicism
About how we should have made it
Or change the beat/tempo

The one that got away

Mix / loop

This world doesnt seem real
This world doesnt seem real

An enraged sense of passion
Broke a million sunset memories

She walks with axe in hand tonight

Capillary stained dress
Whiskey lipped induced trance
And in this...
Awake for the first time
Since the last time
Your analogies seemed trite
She walks with an axe in hand tonight
My blank stare seems feeble
And will never halt your stride

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Published on Tuesday, June 12, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Passion Murder Mask... She Walks With Axe in Hand Tonight"

On Monday, April 20, 2009, slow.burn.star (84) wrote:

The Kerry House. ~ Still a great one.
A former member wrote: "And in this.../ Awake for the first time/ Since the last time" I'm not quite sure why, but those have to be my favourite lines. The entire write is beautifully done with great imagery. the betrayal must have been dreadful. --Kaosu
A former member wrote: i love all the imagery; 'Capillary stained dress, Whiskey lipped induced trance' keep writing x
A former member wrote: "Flat-lined cynicism" Dude, fuckin 10. Great work, man.
On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Yes I love, love and love. What stories you can tell with the twirl of your tongue.
On Friday, June 15, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

..loved this especially the first stanza.. and to echo everyone else - superb
On Friday, June 15, 2007, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

you speak parts that speak wholes .. like instant analogies you never heard, yet understand. some of them simply classic ..(dirt smirk) - crazeworld huntress spilled out in shorthand ..
On Friday, June 15, 2007, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

dug this completely ... so fun to read ... funguy
A former member wrote: i like! for some reason it reminded me of slipknots video for vermillion
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, unspeakable truth (94) wrote:

I have no words here, but this is dancing in my head. I read it 3 times tonight, keep being drawn back....still with my breath taken away.
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

truly your poem has the weight of the blade.... "She walks with an axe in hand tonight" that line realy stuck to me.. "And chase dreams across Flat-lined cynicism " i know how hard this is...in awe
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

is i. I always imagine different kind of music in backround when reading your writes, maybe its just in my head....
On Sunday, June 17, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

This might seem weird but in my head Cedric Bixler-Zavala sings the line "She walks with an axe in hand tonight" and it fills my mind..
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

There were lines in this that took new twists I wasn't expecting, bending my brain beautifully to their images wrought so fantastically by you. -Carl
A former member wrote: I always love reading your writes. Bravo once again.
A former member wrote: .. i cant find words lately. but you are exquisite.
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Oh in that case I see no reason why not to praise this write.. Good one Cloud Mix/Loop's off
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Does an axe have a blade ? *Runs off*
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, openureyes (55) wrote:

Amazing, your mix of emotions paint a vivid picture. Awesome ;) ~Robyn
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

Is this a repost/rework? The repeat line/title sticks in my head; I've loved it before and I love it now. Awesomely effective.
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

yes, its a rework :) it just was not perfect in my own mind.... guess im kinda chaotic but i feel like its complete now with some added structure. thanks ink tounge girl :D
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, LadyMalice (18) wrote:

Very interesting. I love it. ^_^
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Moonflower (298) wrote:

damn that is fucking amazing.
On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

wow........its awesome to hear a new write from the genious.....damn, ......good write,........keep writing ~*D*~