Thanks for the blowjob

By BeautifullyRuined

Watch me freefall from sanity
my bloody fingers
got so tired of hanging onto
the edge
are you planning on catching me
you havent in the past
so why start caring at this late date

All...by...myself
i`ll sing it to you
when i take a break from
histarical laughter
i never meant to give up on us
i just got so tired of fighting
for a cause i had already lost

A quick curtsey to the inevitable
polite to the end
spouting Fuck Yous
wrapped in pretty red ribbon
damn there really is a first time
for everything

and all good things do come to an end
but this was bad from the
beginning so i guess
it doesnt count

1...2 I Love You
3...4 Not Anymore
5...6 Suck My Dick
you know the one i dont have

I need some space
but the universe just isnt big enough
to put enough distance
between us

Alright lets take some time apart
How about the rest of forever
starting......................
.........................
...........
NOW

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© 2007 BeautifullyRuined
Published on Tuesday, April 3, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Tania On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    From what youve been telling me lately i think i know where this write came from.. be strong honey.. wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: Well said. Bravo! -Marlena

  • elisa On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    haha....oh, oh, and oh i love this.... '...1...2 I Love You 3...4 Not Anymore 5...6 Suck My Dick ...' ...this is what i call a 'blowjob' poem.

  • A former member wrote: this*

  • A former member wrote: i really liked tis. it was very emotional. ~ saddened.

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