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By thefairytaleheart

i would die for you
if you stay alive for me.
im sick of how you treat yourself.
why don't you see
you deserve to be loved
and not used.
you deserve to love
and not cry
everytime i see your eyes
you nearly make me cry
when i see the hurt inside
when i see what used to be a soul
it seems its not there anymore
what happened that you couldn't tell me
when did i lose your trust
why didn't you clue me in
i tried to read you but you said i'd made
all the wrong accusations
but all along i was actually right.
so i don't know what you want from me
but i'll still be here for you
cause i see what you refuse to
i see your pain
i see when your pitiful
but never hold it against you
in a perfect world you would never need me
but then i guess you never have.
maybe i should just

go.

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© 2007 thefairytaleheart
Published on Tuesday, April 3, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Shortnlethal On Monday, March 23, 2009, Shortnlethal (65)By person wrote:

    i really liked this..it hit home hard and i have felt like this before in my short life ^^ i think the best work is when it hits home! weldone! ^^

  • Swift On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Swift (35)By person wrote:

    I loved this, honestly. This is what my friend seemed like he felt when he tried to get to know me way back when.. Favorite. ~Amber

  • Disassembly Boy On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Disassembly Boy (59)By person wrote:

    Omg. The pain and love fell from your words so beautifully. I'm in love with this.

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    propper ending to a propper poem. kudos

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