BITCH

By prettydisgrace

You evoke me,
you put two hands around
my neck and then you choke me,
your spiteful words
they cut away
only to intice me,
a woman scorned
is twice as strong
so dont invite me..

A masquarade, a cheap facade,
all along you
want to fight me,
a plastic smile,
it stays awhile
and then I wipe it
up off your face
a * pretty (dis)grace*
see how you like it..

My confidante
I'll strip you bare
so dont (de)test me
one by one
each strands undone,
your weakness... it astounds me.

INSECURITIES swallow you whole
But as i spit you out
and then watch you fall..

[Stop.Bitch.die]

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Published on Friday, March 9, 2007. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "BITCH"

A former member wrote: Doesnt anger spit out great poetry!!! Sometimes i love when im mad just so i can write!!! =]
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (118) wrote:

This was great!I could feel the malice.. It made me shiver.
On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Winter Born (169) wrote:

As usual, I will have to back mab up on this one... all of your work is very well done. simple to the point and full of emotion. Love it can't wait for more to show.
On Thursday, March 22, 2007, Dark Nymph (25) wrote:

Fantastic. Such anger compiled into such a poem.
A former member wrote: Babe this was awsome..i like how u can feel what you write!!great job~manda~
On Friday, March 16, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94) wrote:

I really like this i felt your anger yet it made me smile.~Elana
A former member wrote: i like it when your anger pours right off the page.
On Sunday, March 11, 2007, prettydisgrace (96) wrote:

Thanks mab i have to pour it somewhere :)
On Saturday, March 10, 2007, Tania (197) wrote:

*gasps* u changed some.... nice work.
On Saturday, March 10, 2007, prettydisgrace (96) wrote:

thanks prick...i know exactly what u mean ;)
On Saturday, March 10, 2007, Disassembly Boy (61) wrote:

I love this. In fact, I love all of your poems... I tend to find myself pulled more towards your style of writing....as opposed to the people who try to be all intricate.. that annoys me. Great job.
On Friday, March 9, 2007, D3ADT0WN (186) wrote:

This was awsome!! Such words to explain how you feel. Great job. ~Ezimo
On Friday, March 9, 2007, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

wow. this really took me by suprise. thought this would be another one of those crazy emo writes, but its not. Great write -Kinks
A former member wrote: This is wonderful! I love your use of words..Very good write!