it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover.
By i tremble
I need you.
I don't want to,
but I do.
Sometimes I pretend
that I’m the blood
that swims through
your veins
just so I can feel
close to you.
I pretend that
I’m your heart
(that pulsing organ of emotion),
the main thing that
keeps you alive.
Love me.
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© 2007 jodeanna franks
Published on Wednesday, March 7, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
So much power you've put into so few words. An excellent write!
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On Saturday, May 19, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
you say so much with so few words... you have a unique gift
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On Friday, March 16, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
fully agree with lynaes. this hurts. i had a heart once.... smitten, this was a powerhouse.
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On Friday, March 16, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
oh good god... ow..
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On Friday, March 16, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
it's that horrible catch-22.. your instincts say you want them, but your head says you shouldn't. you so desperately want to be close enough to be the reason their heart beats.. incredibly painful.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, PaperPromises
(53) wrote:
Love the title. It sums up this poetry perfectly. -Cor
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, openureyes
(55) wrote:
Wow I can feel this. You said so much in so few word. Love it
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, Swift
(35) wrote:
I love the way you portrayed this... Very nice. ~Amber
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
it is indeed. and I'm sure many have felt this. wonderful delivery.