it is much easier to love love than it is to love a lover.

By i tremble

I need you.
I don't want to,
but I do.

Sometimes I pretend
that I’m the blood
that swims through
your veins
just so I can feel
close to you.

I pretend that
I’m your heart
(that pulsing organ of emotion),
the main thing that
keeps you alive.

Love me.

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© 2007 jodeanna franks
Published on Wednesday, March 7, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: So much power you've put into so few words. An excellent write!

  • jack paper On Saturday, May 19, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    you say so much with so few words... you have a unique gift

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, March 16, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    fully agree with lynaes. this hurts. i had a heart once.... smitten, this was a powerhouse.

  • Lynaes On Friday, March 16, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    oh good god... ow..

  • Lynaes On Friday, March 16, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    it's that horrible catch-22.. your instincts say you want them, but your head says you shouldn't. you so desperately want to be close enough to be the reason their heart beats.. incredibly painful.

  • PaperPromises On Thursday, March 8, 2007, PaperPromises (53)By person wrote:

    Love the title. It sums up this poetry perfectly. -Cor

  • openureyes On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, openureyes (55)By person wrote:

    Wow I can feel this. You said so much in so few word. Love it

  • Swift On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, Swift (35)By person wrote:

    I love the way you portrayed this... Very nice. ~Amber

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    it is indeed. and I'm sure many have felt this. wonderful delivery.

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