precious

By prettydisgrace

I wake up in the middle of red,
i see red all around me
its sparkle is amazing,im inside a ruby
im inside your heart

its not beating too fast
although i know your alive
its closing in on me
not sparkling anymore...

i can see your soul through this ruby
i can see your eyes of emerald
i can see your life like opal
and your dreams are too precious

talk to me...let me in
like i am in your heart of ruby right now
the one i have broken
but still deep within...forgive me, you are precious

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Published on Wednesday, March 7, 2007. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Comments on "precious"

On Monday, April 23, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

I really liked the imagination of this piece, and those last 2 lines closed the piece brilliantly, rounding the poem off most satisfyingly. -Carl
On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (116) wrote:

Great imagery.I liked this very much
On Friday, March 23, 2007, Enigma (90) wrote:

great writng I can picture it in my mind..
A former member wrote: you've painted a very lovely picture, thank you for sharing.
On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

thanks mab,and thanks to everyone who enjoys
A former member wrote: your writing is a precious jewel.your imagery absolutely shines!
On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

you are too cute! for somereason the first part made me think of what it is like inside of a grape :) thank you for the imagery
On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

a grape? hehe!
On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

'im inside a ruby..im inside your heart' :) hmm intresting joey.. very good write. me liked it.
A former member wrote: definately a very dark write. i loved it. welcome , welcome to dp. ~ saddened.
On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, D3ADT0WN (185) wrote:

This is great.. I loved it. And since i didnt get the change to tell you before. Welcome to dp. Hope you stat :] ~Ezimo