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a moon, or a star...
By GoldenLotus
if, forever
could
hold
in her spirits heart
a moment
in time
from this meeting afar
i bet that she
(if she were a moon or a star)
could never
be more beautiful
than in the moments
i saw
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A former member wrote:
this was very, very inspiring and wonderfully written. ~ saddened.
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On Monday, March 5, 2007, Bella Butchery
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wrote:
sometimes i miss the good ones, didnt realize you have been here for so long.. and your words shatter a glass heart that has been glued too many times, bravo, i love pieces that ripple that effect in me
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On Friday, March 2, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I had to read this twice, and second time around....I love it. You really brought out beauty here, and the flow works. Great work.
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