When

By BeautifullyRuined

How long must i wait for you to really love me
"When the sun burns itself to ashes"
When will you hold me and not pretend i`m someone else
"When there is no one else for me to imagine"
When will your kisses reach my lips instead of stopping in mid-air
"When all the air disapears suctioning me to you"
When will you look at me like I`m beautiful
"When the standard for beauty is demolished"
When will you tell me I`m your everything
"When there is nothing left but you"
When will you promise me forever
"When it turns into just one night"
When will you let me go
"NEVER"
why?
"Because you actually love me"





Written in like 2 minutes so it`s not the best
just random thoughts

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© 2007 BeautifullyRuined
Published on Tuesday, January 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • jack paper On Monday, February 5, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    interesting question/answer format i like the way you ended it...

  • A former member wrote: Maybe random thoughts, but I thought it was great. :)

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